-OLD- FMA:SC ''Where it begins''

This has been on my harddrive God know's HOW long. Dear lord. I just found it today... I don't know if I posted it back when I first created it,but I wanted to at least fix it up. But anyway,it's a flash back in the story where Envy takes care (and tries to corrupt) little baby GreedPhonse.
An Alternate Universe fanfiction by the way.
So I tried to redo the text a little,ahahah;

I could not draw back then,dear lord...
To those who want to know what FMA Sinful Corruptions is about,here's a part 1 of the official guide ::
Official Guide to FMA:Sinful Corruptions Pt. 1
What is "FMA: Sinful Corruptions"?
◘ Plot ◘
FMA:Sinful Corruptions is an Alternate Universe Fullmetal Alchemist fanfiction created by Melissa N. P. in 2005 which is based off the laws of the 2003!Fullmetal Alchemist anime series with mixtures of some of the elements of the Manga and many original elements. The basis of the plot consists of an alternate path with Edward and Alphonse in which they DO NOT get to attempt to revive Trisha,instead Alphonse contracts a deadly illness as 10 and dies shortly after the age of 13,leaving Edward to choose to revive his mother or his brother,which he chooses Alphonse. Upon failing he creates a homunculus (2003 Style laws) shortly dubbed the new "Greed",leaving Ed not just crippled with loss of limbs,but cripples him internally with the loss of some internal organs (similar to Izumi's loss). The plot goes forward where Edward journeys after s

And if you're interested join the official dA group for it!
FMASinfulCorruptions

So I hope it's okay to post;; I am desperate to post things;;
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FMA,Envy © Hiromu Arakawa
FMA: Sinful Corruptions,GreedPhonse and...this art. © SweetheartedSadist | Melissa N. P. | 2005 - 2015